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GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:11, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • Don't these types of article usually have an infobox?
    •  Done
  • Boston Transit Building and Tower Records Building could be created as redirects to this article, especially as you state they are legitimate "also known as" names.
    •  Done
  • However, it's worth noting that I don't see where in the article these alternative names are referenced?
    •  Done
  • "An additional story" in the lead you didn't previously mention how many stories were originally built.
    •  Done
  • "The west part of the Back Bay was filled in the 1870s." don't understand what "filled" means here.
    •  Done The bay was quite literally filled with gravel to create new land. I've added a wikilink to clarify.
  • " Boylston Street Subway" subway not capitalised.
  • " it on April 3, 1913 and demolished " comma after 1913.
    •  Done
  • " a E.U. Wurlitzer" an.
    •  Done
  • "The outlet - billed as the largest record store in the country - opened " hyphens should be en-dashes.
    •  Done
  • " Architects - the" ditto.
    •  Done
  • "In 2007, the lower three floors were expected to sell for $45-55 million." en-dash for range. And, did they sell? I'm not clear what this means.
    •  Done Fixed that dash and found a ref for the sale.
  • Online resources should have publication date or access date as a minimum.
    •  Done Fixed one that was missing.
  • "MIT Libraries - 360 Newbury Street" en-dash.
    •  Done
  • "Government buildings completed in 1919" category, only mention of "government" in the article!
    • BERy was government-controlled after 1918.

That's all I have. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:51, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! Pi.1415926535 (talk) 19:45, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Good work, I had a check and couldn't find anything else, so I'm promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 06:56, 10 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]