Talk:2019 Six-red World Championship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:34, 19 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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"The 2019 SangSom Six-red World Championship.." move the sponsorship to a parenthetical "... for sponsorship reasons" sentence.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
En-dashes in scorelines.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"Thepchaiya Un-Nooh" be consistent (infobox has Thepchaiya Un-nooh, as does Maximum breaks section).
Done I never know how these names work. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"A total of 4,000,000 Thai Baht " Baht isn't capitalised.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Other articles now seem to have format first and prize money as a subsection.
- They do... But I couldn't stretch out a worthwhile format section, so I combined into summary. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 17:51, 22 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"Third in Group" not sure Group needs capitalising.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Highest break score isn't mentioned in infobox
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"Tournament Summary" -> "Tournament summary"
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"The 2019 Six-red world championship" capitalisation consistency.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"pro-am" en-dash.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps say that 32 players were invited.
Added to group stages Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"runner-ups" do you mean "runners-up"?
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Or avoid it altogether by saying "the top two in each group"...
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"Group A" vs "group B", consistency.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"by John Higgins 5-0.[7] Higgins" merge to avoid quick repeat.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"still "felt good".[17][16]" ref order.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"with a round-robin group " dab link.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Group A table much wider than all the others.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Not sure you need all that bold text in the player names...
I don't really see how it's different from the results table. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
You don't need the country abbreviations at all in the Knockout stage table as they've all already been covered in the Group tables.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Avoid spaced hyphens in the ref titles. En-dashes please.
Done I think the script got them all Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Don't repeat source names in ref titles.
Working Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:38, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 17:52, 22 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

That's all for a first review, so it's on hold. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 12:10, 19 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lee, let me know when you're done? Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 17:40, 22 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry TRM, all done. Thought I'd already replied Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 17:52, 22 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lee, still plenty of source names in the ref titles.... The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 19:53, 22 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Whoops, I only got the ones defined in the reflist. All done now. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:59, 22 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I made a couple of tweaks but I'm happy with the article now in terms of GA so I'm promoting, good work, onto the next one! The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 15:56, 23 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]