Talk:2019 Paul Hunter Classic/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HawkAussie (talk · contribs) 00:37, 23 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

I will be happy to review this article and see if their are things that need be improved apron. HawkAussie (talk) 00:37, 23 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking a look at this one HawkAussie! I'm back from my honeymoon now, so will be more than happy to make any changes that the article requires. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:25, 25 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi HawkAussie - I know you are probably busy, but I just wanted to know if this one might be looked at in the next few days? Not a problem if it will take longer. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 13:46, 30 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

2019 edition of the Paul Hunter Classic first held in 2004 as the Grand Prix Fürth. - I'm not really a person who likes to see red links in the lead but I assume you will get to that page soon enough.
- Me neither, but it's a notable event, and it's surprising it doesn't have an article. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:42, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The event featured a 16-player bracket with a qualification tournament. - Maybe expand along the lines of how many entered the qualification tournament or when the qualification was held
- Added location. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:42, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
You could the highest break down into the second paragraph of the lead instead of it being on the first.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:42, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Tournament format

The Paul Hunter Classic was named after deceased snooker professional, Paul Hunter. - A slight expansion to include when he did die as you have it in the lead but not in the main body.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:44, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Qualifying for the event featured 36 participants. - You could in some way merge this with the previous sentence.
- Combined Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:46, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
...were invited to play, but pulled out of the event. - Remove the comma here.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:46, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
All matches held in the event were played as best-of-7-frames. - This is probably placed in the wrong section of the paragraph 2 as I would think that it should be at the end.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:46, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Tournament summary

Iulian Boiko won the qualifying event, defeating Barry Pinches 3–2 in the final. - Just a thought that you had already mentioned that earlier in the article.
- Sure, but qualifying is often commented on in the tournament summary on events like this. (see the 2019 World Snooker Championship, for example.) It'd feel wrong not to mention it at all. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:50, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
All matches finished 4–0. - That sentence just feels too short to have on it's own.
- Combined Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:50, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
...over Ricky Walden, and Mark King... - Remove the comma
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:50, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Isn't the section for the semi-finals a bit light for info considering the two semis, but than again this is a non-ranking event.
- Not much I can do. The event wasn't even broadcast outside of facebook. The sources don't say much. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:50, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
China Championship, and lose - Comma removal
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:50, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

References

No problem with the references here.

Final comments

It's good just need to do a couple of touch ups for this article and hopefully I will be able to give you a GA. HawkAussie (talk) 01:43, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- I think I have it all now HawkAussie - thanks for your speedy review! Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:50, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  - Lee Vilenski Alright this good to go, well done. HawkAussie (talk) 21:43, 31 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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