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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:2016 Monaco GP2 Series round/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:10, 6 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]



  • "Sergey Sirotkin won the pole position by posting the fastest lap in qualifying " pole position for the feature race.
  • "The results of the round meant Nato's results in both races took the lead of the Drivers' Championship" Could use a rewrite
  • "to the top the standings" Missing an of. Also, specify who had held first?
  • "The 2016 Monaco GP2 Series round was the second of eleven scheduled events" Are they all -- or mostly all -- doubleheaders like this one?
  • Check your antecedent in " the latter due to him qualifying in 22nd and was unable to take his three-place grid penalty.[14]" -- the last name mentioned is not the 22nd qualifier.
  • "to out-braked him " something needs doing here.
  • "On lap six, the first mandatory pit stops to change tyres were made by Giovinazzi, Ghiotto, Pic and Kirchhöfer as Nato who were further down the field" Again, just needs a re-arrange.
  • "Meanwhile, a chain of VSCs was triggered on lap 18" Multiple VSC's on one lap?
  • "terminal damage for Eriksson" He didn't die, did he?
  • "Despite the VSC allowing to Markelov increase his advantage upfront" Missing a 'to'