Talk:2005 Macau Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 19:24, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

Doing now. Courcelles (talk) 19:24, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

• "The 2005 Macau Grand Prix was the fifty-first running of the event " Um, nope, not according to the lead.
• "was the sole representative" This could use work "Was the sole champion taking part" or something.
• "Furthermore, the champion of the British Formula Three International Series Álvaro Parente had an A1GP commitment in Malaysia. " Appears unsourced
• "Thus the highest placed participants from the Euro and British series' were Lucas di Grassi and Charlie Kimball. " Respectively could be added as the last word in this sentence
• "an poor-handling car due to one of his wheels being buckled from the accident with Bamba." a) You don't need "an" here, and b) Where is this sourced?
• "slow puncture" A slow puncture of what? His tire?
• "But, on his second appearance in Macau" DOn't need this But.

• Just minor things, really. Courcelles (talk) 20:15, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

• @Courcelles: Have addressed all of the points mentioned in the review. MWright96 (talk) 20:38, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

• Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 20:50, 24 July 2018 (UTC)