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Vincent Reagan Lumala is a Ugandan inline skater, founder of the Skating Club of Kampala, and the current President of the club since 2016. He is recognized as one of Uganda’s prominent athletes, known for his competitive skating achievements both locally and internationally.

Early life

Lumala’s passion for skating began in 2011 when he first laced up his skates in the streets of Kampala. With limited formal training facilities available, he learned skating by engaging with local street skating groups and receiving informal guidance from friends and community members. Over time, he discovered a sense of purpose in the sport and became deeply involved.

Skating career

Skating Club of Kampala

In 2016, Lumala founded the Skating Club of Kampala, which became Uganda's first-ever roller skating club. Despite challenges such as the lack of public funding, the club has flourished under his leadership. It has become a key platform for the development of young skating talent, and Lumala has personally trained thousands of children, including those as young as three, through community outreach programs.

Competitions and Achievements

Lumala’s career rapidly progressed, earning him a spot on Uganda’s National Roll Ball Team. He has represented Uganda in several prestigious events, including the East Africa Roll Ball Championships held in Rwanda and Kenya. Lumala also served as the team captain during the 2021 Inline Speed Skating World Championship in Colombia. His involvement in these events has helped raise Uganda’s profile in the international skating community.

Coaching and Mentorship

A certified skating coach through Skate Fresh UK, Lumala made history as the first certified skating coach in Uganda. His coaching career goes beyond his personal competition experiences, as he is committed to mentoring and guiding new skaters. He has been integral in introducing skating to children across Uganda through school programs.

References

General references

Kawowo. "Vincent Reagan Lumala: The passionate Ugandan skater who raged Kampala’s streets to rest of world." Kawowo, 29 August 2024. Retrieved from https://kawowo.com/2024/08/29/vincent-reagan-lumala-the-passionate-ugandan-skater-who-raged-kampalas-streets-to-rest-of-world/?utm_source=chatgpt.com
New Vision. "Skaters head to Colombia for world championships." New Vision. Retrieved from https://www.newvision.co.ug/category/sports/skaters-head-to-colombia-for-world-championsh-NV_119234
YouTube. "Vincent Reagan Lumala Skating." YouTube, uploaded by Skating Club of Kampala, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ixaxBGVpoJU
Instagram. "Skating Club of Kampala." Instagram, https://www.instagram.com/skating_club_of_kampala/