User talk:Emma.parkins
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[edit]Hello, Emma.parkins, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:46, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
Zana's Peer Review
[edit]I like the headings that you have so far. Maybe you could also add a brief section for the history where you discuss when it was first discovered, etc.
One suggestion I have is for the lead section. I think the first sentence should start by defining the topic instead of beginning with a definition of microRNAs. You could use what you have written in your second sentence like: "miR-324-5p is a microRNA that functions in cell growth, apoptosis, cancer [1], epilepsy ([2], [3], neuronal differentiation [4], psychiatric conditions [5], cardiac disease pathology [6] [7], and more [8]" You could also link the word microRNA to its page so you don't need to give an explanation of that as well.
Great start so far!
Response:
Thanks Zana! I'm adding a history section and editing the intro as you suggested. This is difficult to find information about!