Talk:Janine Sherman Barrois

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Edit request 18 October 2023

Janine Sherman Barrois is an award-winning American television writer, producer, and showrunner. Janine launched her company, Folding Chair Productions, in 2021, and they now have a multi-year deal at Warner Bros. to create and produce TV series. Her work includes Claws, ''Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam CJ Walker'', ''The Kings of Napa'', ''Criminal Minds'', ER and more. She was recently an executive producer of the Tribeca documentary Hargrove. Janine is currently showrunning the Apple TV+ limited series, [[The Big Cigar]]. − This is a test + This was a test! Career Janine started her career working on TV shows such as The Jamie Foxx Show and Eddie Murphy’s The PJ’s. − This is a test + This was a test! Janine spent five seasons on Third Watch, rising from story editor to co-executive producer. She went on to join the hit series ER for its final four seasons, during which she rose to executive producer. In 2010, she joined the CBS crime series Criminal Minds, where she was executive producer for the next five seasons. After that, Janine moved on to Warner Bros. and became the showrunner and executive producer for ClawsClaws}}</ref>, the hit TNT dramedy starring Niecy Nash and Carrie Preston. In addition, she was the co-showrunner and executive producer of the award-winning Netflix limited series Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam CJ Walker Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam C.J. Walker, starring Oscar-winning actress Octavia Spencer. Soon after, Janine created the highly acclaimed OWN series [[The Kings of Napa]]. Janine made her directorial debut with the short film French Fries, which won best film at the famed Crested Butte Film Festival. − This is a test + This was a test! Throughout her career, Janine has won several NAACP Image Awards and has been nominated for a Humanitas Award. Janine attended Howard University and is a graduate of the Warner Bros. Writers Workshop. She is active in the WGA, where she serves in their Mentoring Program as a judge for their Writer Access Project and on the committee for the showrunner training program. She is also active in the contemporary art world and currently serves on the Hammer Museum’s Board of Advisors. − This is a test + This was a test! This should be changed because it's an accurate representation of her career to date while highlighting her trajectory and achievement. I've linked several sources throughout the bio. I'm again that I am connected to the Wikipedia page subject.: References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button): References

Jsbarroisasst (talk) 23:44, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

please let me know if additional resources are necessary Jsbarroisasst (talk) 23:45, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

Reply 18-OCT-2023

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4. Attestations towards the subject's moral character (e.g., "as a leader, she continues to be an advocate and strive for the advancement of women and people of color in the entertainment industry"), while aspirational, must be omitted from the proposed text.
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6. All instances where the subject's first name is used need to be deleted and replaced with the subject's last name.
7. Certain claims need to be clarified: Soon after, Janine created the highly acclaimed OWN series The Kings of Napa (i.e., what is meant by "created").
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Regards,  Spintendo  01:27, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for the notes! I resubmitted the edits. Jsbarroisasst (talk) 00:06, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

Hi! Just following up on this - thanks so much! Jsbarroisasst (talk) 19:02, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

Jsbarroisasst, you were given very clear notes by Spintendo and most of these have not been followed up on. The text you have proposed will not be added to the article because it still reads as promotional. You need to get rid of all adjectives like "award winning", "hit", "famed" etc - these are the kinds of things a person says about themselves in a resume but have no place in an encyclopedia. You also need to provide reliable sources for all claims, which you have not done for a number, including but not limited to the Butte Film Festival award or the WGA programs. And you have not replaced "Janine" with her surname which is the accepted style for biographies here. Please make all these changes and submit a new edit request below as previously requested. Melcous (talk) 22:21, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

Janine Sherman Barrois

Edit request 25 October 2023

Janine Sherman Barrois is an award-winning American television writer, producer, and showrunner. Sherman Barrois launched her company, Folding Chair Productions, in 2021, and they now have a multi-year deal at Warner Bros. to create and produce TV series. Her work includes Claws, Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam CJ Walker, The Kings of Napa, Criminal Minds, ER and more. She was recently an executive producer of the Tribeca documentary Hargrove . Sherman Barrois is currently showrunning the Apple TV+ limited series, The Big Cigar. − Janine Sherman Barrois is an American television writer, producer, and showrunner. She is known for her work on ER, Third Watch and Criminal Minds.[1] From 2017 to 2022, she executive produced crime comedy-drama Claws on TNT. She also produced Netflix miniseries Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam C.J. Walker, the Oprah Winfrey Network prime time soap opera, The Kings of Napa,[2] and Apple TV+ thriller The Big Cigar.[3] She owned production banner, Folding Chair Prods., which she launched at Warner Bros. Television Group in 2015.[4] + Janine Sherman Barrois is an award-winning American television writer, producer, and showrunner. Sherman Barrois launched her company, Folding Chair Productions, in 2021, and they now have a multi-year deal at Warner Bros. to create and produce TV series. Her work includes Claws, Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam CJ Walker, The Kings of Napa, Criminal Minds, ER and more. Career Sherman Barrois started her career working on TV shows such as The Jamie Foxx Show and Eddie Murphy’s The PJ’s. − Sherman Barrois began her career as a assistant on the 1994 television series, South Central[citation needed] and later in films The Glass Shield (1994) and Major Payne (1995). Her first producer credit was in the 1996 film Bulletproof.[5] From 1997 to 1998, Barrois worked as a writer on The Jamie Foxx Show. She wrote three episodes across the second and third seasons.[citation needed] She went on to become a co-producer of The PJs and then was hired as an executive story editor for Third Watch by John Wells. + Sherman Barrois started her career working on TV shows such as The Jamie Foxx Show and Eddie Murphy’s The PJ’s. Sherman Barrois spent five seasons on Third Watch, rising from story editor to co-executive producer. She went on to join the series ER for its final four seasons, during which she rose to executive producer. In 2010, she joined the CBS crime series Criminal Minds, where she was executive producer for the next five seasons. After that, Sherman Barrois moved on to Warner Bros. and became the showrunner and executive producer for Claws. In addition, she was the co-showrunner and executive producer of the Netflix limited series Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam C.J. Walker, starring Oscar-winning actress Octavia Spencer.. Soon after, Janine was the creator and executive producer of the OWN series The Kings of Napa . Sherman Barrois made her directorial debut with the short film French Fries. − When Third Watch ended she became a co-executive producer for another Wells series, ER. She joined the crew of ER in the twelfth season. She was nominated for a Humanitas Prize in the 60 minutes category and an Image Award for Outstanding Writing in a Drama Series for her work on the twelfth season ER episode "Darfur" in 2007.[1] She was nominated for a second Image Award for writing in 2008 for her work on the thirteenth season ER episode "Breach of Trust".[citation needed] She was again nominated for her season 15 work for the episode entitled "Parental Guidance".[citation needed] In 2010, she joined the CBS crime series, Criminal Minds at the beginning of season six and left at the end of season ten. In 2015, she signed a multi-year overall deal at Warner Bros. Television.[6] + Sherman Barrois spent five seasons on [[Third Watch]], rising from story editor to co-executive producer. She went on to join the series ER for its final four seasons, during which she rose to executive producer. In 2010, she joined the CBS crime series Criminal Minds, where she was executive producer for the next five seasons. After that, Sherman Barrois moved on to Warner Bros. and became the showrunner and executive producer for Claws. In addition, she was the co-showrunner and executive producer of the Netflix limited series ''Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam CJ Walker. Soon after, Janine was the creator and executive producer of the OWN series, The Kings of Napa. Sherman Barrois made her directorial debut with the short film French Fries. Throughout her career, Sherman Barrois has won several NAACP Image Awards and has been nominated for a Humanitas Award. I think the current article should be changed to accurately reflect Janine Sherman Barrois' career and accurate dates of the founding of her company: Why it should be changed: References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button): References

Jsbarroisasst (talk) 00:11, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for your efforts in making these changes, it's much appreciated. There is some difficulty I see you're having with one of the templates, {{TextDiff}}. That template actually carries two numbered parameters that need to be filled out. Those numbers |1= and |2= allow you to place the two different versions side by side here on the talk page. The formatting should look exactly like this. Make sure you add only the text you see below in red font (but with your own text placed under parameters 1 and 2 for the text to be replaced and the text that is the replacement, respectively.)

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If you could go back into your request and correct the instances where the template is used, that would be a big help . Thank you! Regards,  Spintendo  22:47, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

Hi! Thanks for getting back to me. I made the changes. Hopefully I did it correctly - let me know if there's something else I need to change - thanks big! Jsbarroisasst (talk) 17:01, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

Hey! Just following up - thanks so much! 2603:8000:D1F0:6910:74F2:73F9:491F:5371 (talk) 17:02, 30 October 2023 (UTC)

Hi! Just following up again - thanks so much! Jsbarroisasst (talk) 19:35, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

Edit request

Edit request 8 November 2023

Janine Sherman Barrois is an award-winning American television writer, producer, and showrunner. Sherman Barrois launched her company, Folding Chair Productions, in 2021, and they now have a multi-year deal at Warner Bros. to create and produce TV series. Her work includes Claws, Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam CJ Walker, The Kings of Napa, Criminal Minds, ER and more. She was recently an executive producer of the Tribeca documentary Hargrove . Sherman Barrois is currently showrunning the Apple TV+ limited series, The Big Cigar. − Janine Sherman Barrois is an American television writer, producer, and showrunner. She is known for her work on ER, Third Watch and Criminal Minds.[1] From 2017 to 2022, she executive produced crime comedy-drama Claws on TNT. She also produced Netflix miniseries Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam C.J. Walker, the Oprah Winfrey Network prime time soap opera, The Kings of Napa,[2] and Apple TV+ thriller The Big Cigar.[3] She owned production banner, Folding Chair Prods., which she launched at Warner Bros. Television Group in 2015.[4] + Janine Sherman Barrois is an award-winning American television writer, producer, and showrunner. Sherman Barrois launched her company, Folding Chair Productions, in 2021, and they now have a multi-year deal at Warner Bros. to create and produce TV series. Her work includes Claws, Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam CJ Walker, The Kings of Napa, Criminal Minds, ER and more. Career Sherman Barrois started her career working on TV shows such as The Jamie Foxx Show and Eddie Murphy’s The PJ’s. − Sherman Barrois began her career as a assistant on the 1994 television series, South Central[citation needed] and later in films The Glass Shield (1994) and Major Payne (1995). Her first producer credit was in the 1996 film Bulletproof.[5] From 1997 to 1998, Barrois worked as a writer on The Jamie Foxx Show. She wrote three episodes across the second and third seasons.[citation needed] She went on to become a co-producer of The PJs and then was hired as an executive story editor for Third Watch by John Wells. + Sherman Barrois started her career working on TV shows such as The Jamie Foxx Show and Eddie Murphy’s The PJ’s. Sherman Barrois spent five seasons on Third Watch, rising from story editor to co-executive producer. She went on to join the series ER for its final four seasons, during which she rose to executive producer. In 2010, she joined the CBS crime series Criminal Minds, where she was executive producer for the next five seasons. After that, Sherman Barrois moved on to Warner Bros. and became the showrunner and executive producer for Claws. In addition, she was the co-showrunner and executive producer of the Netflix limited series Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam C.J. Walker, starring Oscar-winning actress Octavia Spencer.. Soon after, Janine was the creator and executive producer of the OWN series The Kings of Napa . Sherman Barrois made her directorial debut with the short film French Fries. − When Third Watch ended she became a co-executive producer for another Wells series, ER. She joined the crew of ER in the twelfth season. She was nominated for a Humanitas Prize in the 60 minutes category and an Image Award for Outstanding Writing in a Drama Series for her work on the twelfth season ER episode "Darfur" in 2007.[1] She was nominated for a second Image Award for writing in 2008 for her work on the thirteenth season ER episode "Breach of Trust".[citation needed] She was again nominated for her season 15 work for the episode entitled "Parental Guidance".[citation needed] In 2010, she joined the CBS crime series, Criminal Minds at the beginning of season six and left at the end of season ten. In 2015, she signed a multi-year overall deal at Warner Bros. Television.[6] + Sherman Barrois spent five seasons on [[Third Watch]], rising from story editor to co-executive producer. She went on to join the series ER for its final four seasons, during which she rose to executive producer. In 2010, she joined the CBS crime series Criminal Minds, where she was executive producer for the next five seasons. After that, Sherman Barrois moved on to Warner Bros. and became the showrunner and executive producer for Claws. In addition, she was the co-showrunner and executive producer of the Netflix limited series ''Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam CJ Walker. Soon after, Janine was the creator and executive producer of the OWN series, The Kings of Napa. Sherman Barrois made her directorial debut with the short film French Fries. Throughout her career, Sherman Barrois has won several NAACP Image Awards and has been nominated for a Humanitas Award. I think the current article should be changed to accurately reflect Janine Sherman Barrois' career and accurate dates of the founding of her company: Why it should be changed: References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button): References

Jsbarroisasst (talk) 23:53, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

Jsbarroisasst you continue to seek to insert non-neutral and promotional wording into the article, which is not ok. We are not going to add the word "award winning" to the opening sentence - it is meaningless puffery. Specific notable awards can be detailed (and properly referenced) within the article. Nor are we going to say things like "now have a multi year deal", "and more", "shows such as", "rising from" etc etc. This is all the kind of marketing language someone uses to talk about themselves, but not how a neutral encyclopedia article should be written. If there are specific inaccuracies about dates or roles please point them out, but continuing to propose the exact same kind of wording it not going to get anywhere. Melcous (talk) 04:16, 9 November 2023 (UTC)

Edit request 14-NOV-2023

Edit request 14 November 2023

Janine Sherman Barrois is an American television writer, producer, and showrunner. Sherman Barrois launched her company, Folding Chair Productions, in 2021, and the company has a deal at Warner Bros. to create and produce TV series. Her work includes Claws, Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam CJ Walker, The Kings of Napa, Criminal Minds, and ER.. She was recently an executive producer of the Tribeca documentary Hargrove . Sherman Barrois is currently showrunning the Apple TV+ limited series, The Big Cigar. − Janine Sherman Barrois is an American television writer, producer, and showrunner. She is known for her work on ER, Third Watch and Criminal Minds.[1] From 2017 to 2022, she executive produced crime comedy-drama Claws on TNT. She also produced Netflix miniseries Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam C.J. Walker, the Oprah Winfrey Network prime time soap opera, The Kings of Napa,[2] and Apple TV+ thriller The Big Cigar.[3] She owned production banner, Folding Chair Prods., which she launched at Warner Bros. Television Group in 2015.[4] + Janine Sherman Barrois is an American television writer, producer, and showrunner. Sherman Barrois launched her company, Folding Chair Productions, in 2021, and the company has a deal at Warner Bros. to create and produce TV series. Her work includes Claws, Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam CJ Walker, The Kings of Napa, Criminal Minds, and ER. Career Sherman Barrois started her career working on The Jamie Foxx Show and Eddie Murphy’s The PJ’s. − Sherman Barrois began her career as a assistant on the 1994 television series, South Central[citation needed] and later in films The Glass Shield (1994) and Major Payne (1995). Her first producer credit was in the 1996 film Bulletproof.[5] From 1997 to 1998, Barrois worked as a writer on The Jamie Foxx Show. She wrote three episodes across the second and third seasons.[citation needed] She went on to become a co-producer of The PJs and then was hired as an executive story editor for Third Watch by John Wells. + Sherman Barrois started her career working on The Jamie Foxx Show and Eddie Murphy’s The PJ’s. Sherman Barrois spent five seasons on Third Watch, as a story editor and eventually co-executive producer. She went on to join the series ER for its final four seasons. In 2010, she joined the CBS crime series Criminal Minds, where she was executive producer for the next five seasons. After that, Sherman Barrois moved on to Warner Bros. and became the showrunner and executive producer for Claws. In addition, she was the co-showrunner and executive producer of the Netflix limited series Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam C.J. Walker, starring Oscar-winning actress Octavia Spencer.. Soon after, Janine was the creator and executive producer of the OWN series The Kings of Napa . Sherman Barrois made her directorial debut with the short film French Fries. − When Third Watch ended she became a co-executive producer for another Wells series, ER. She joined the crew of ER in the twelfth season. She was nominated for a Humanitas Prize in the 60 minutes category and an Image Award for Outstanding Writing in a Drama Series for her work on the twelfth season ER episode "Darfur" in 2007.[1] She was nominated for a second Image Award for writing in 2008 for her work on the thirteenth season ER episode "Breach of Trust".[citation needed] She was again nominated for her season 15 work for the episode entitled "Parental Guidance".[citation needed] In 2010, she joined the CBS crime series, Criminal Minds at the beginning of season six and left at the end of season ten. In 2015, she signed a multi-year overall deal at Warner Bros. Television.[6] + Sherman Barrois spent five seasons on [[Third Watch]], as a story editor and eventually co-executive producer. She went on to join the series ER for its final four seasons. In 2010, she joined the CBS crime series Criminal Minds, where she was executive producer for the next five seasons. After that, Sherman Barrois moved on to Warner Bros. and became the showrunner and executive producer for Claws. In addition, she was the co-showrunner and executive producer of the Netflix limited series ''Self Made: Inspired by the Life of Madam CJ Walker. Soon after, Janine was the creator and executive producer of the OWN series, The Kings of Napa. Sherman Barrois made her directorial debut with the short film French Fries. Throughout her career, Sherman Barrois has won several NAACP Image Awards and has been nominated for a Humanitas Award. References

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Jsbarroisasst (talk) 19:23, 14 November 2023 (UTC)

 Clarification needed This request is difficult to process because it is not known what is to be changed here. There is a mixture of text placed using the {{TextDiff}} template along with text placed normally, sprinkled in between the text diff templates. This causes the reviewer to wonder: If this "normally" placed text is to be added to the article, why is it not placed in the textdiff under the |2= parameter? There is also text placed normally at the end of the request which does not appear in any of the textdiff templates. I apologize, but this is quite confusing. Please advise. Thank you! Regards,  Spintendo  21:48, 14 November 2023 (UTC)