Talk:George Tutill/GA1

GA Review

Unsuccessful. IAWW (talk) 17:22, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Unexpectedlydian (talk · contribs) 18:24, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 16:41, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This is a neat little article about a topic and person which I know nothing about! I'm looking forward to reviewing! It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:41, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Unexpectedlydian, I love your name btw!

I have begun the review. I have a concern about the reliability of one of the sources which I addressed below. I'll hold off on the prose review until this has been addressed. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:43, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@It is a wonderful world Hows the progress going on this review? It's been a month now IntentionallyDense ^(Contribs) 15:47, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @IntentionallyDense it seems the nominator is not free to bring this through GA right now so I am failing. @Unexpectedlydian ping me if you bring this to GA in the future. IAWW (talk) 17:22, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Prose (Criteria 1a, 1b, 4) clock

Lead

Definitely include that he was English/British. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Early life

Founding and overview of business

International business

Banner manufacturing process

Style and reception

Art

Personal life

Death and legacy

Sources clock

Health/formatting (Criterion 2a) clock

No broken URLs, I would recommend adding archive links for the two anonymous sources, as they will be really hard to find if the URLs go down. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The "Works cited" section has a duplicate of "The art and ideology of the trade union emblem" source. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reliability (Criterion 2b) clock

Mostly books from reliable publishers, with less reliable sources used to fill in only minor details. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

My only concern is the reliability of Roger Logan's "East Riding to East End" which seems to be self-published? It read like a reliable source, but I cannot find any references to the work, nor any information about Roger Logan being a subject expert. I'll hold off on the prose review until this concern is sorted out, since if it doesn't qualify as a reliable source that will significantly reshape the article. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Spot check (Criteria 2b, 2c, 2d) clock

Copyvio (Criterion 2d) clock

Earwig finds no too close paraphrasing or violations. Will check further on the spot check. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Scope (Criteria 3a, 3b) clock

Stable (Criterion 5) Y

Media clock

This interesting website has an image for Tutill, do you have any idea where it's from? If we can find its original source, it would be a great image for the infobox. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:41, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Tags (Criterion 6a) Y

Captions (Criterion 6b) clock

Two examples of banners manufactured by Tutill for the Court Pride of Onehunga, Ancient Order of Foresters.

It's a bit unclear that the Court Pride of Onehunga is part of the Ancient order of Foresters, rather than them being two separate entities. Perhaps something like "Court Pride of Onehunga, a group within the Ancient Order of Foresters" would be better. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Nitpick: the grammatical subject of the sentence is "Two examples of banners", bit it is clearly meant to be the two banners themselves. Removing "examples of" fixes this ambiguity. It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Link "biblical story of Zacchaeus" It is a wonderful world (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Suggestions (not needed for GA promotion)

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