Talk:Mistakes (Tove Styrke song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 11:00, 30 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox looks good!
Add a comma after third studio album
"The song was released as" → "It was released as" and swap this with the inspiration sentence
""Mistakes" received critical acclaim, with music critics commending its" → ""Mistakes" received acclaim from music critics, who commended its"
Mention that the certification was in Sweden
"the idea of perfection. The video includes references to the 1999 film Runaway Bride" → "the idea of perfection and references to the 1999 film Runaway Bride are included"
Mention the awards ceremony performance at the end of the lead

"wrote "Mistakes" with" → "co-wrote "Mistakes" with"
"the song, and the structure of the chorus was altered several times before" → "the song and the structure of the chorus was altered several times, before" with the pipe
""Finding those special" → ""And finding those special" per the source
"designed the artwork for the "Mistakes" single," → "designed the artwork for "Mistakes","
Remove "of the cover" from the end of the sentence, however the some releases are not sourced
Pipe VAX to VAX (band) per MOS:LINK2SECT

"received widespread praise from music critic." → "was met with widespread praise from music critics."
Idolator should not be italicised
"Day commented, "It's" → "Day commented that "it's"
"bursts from Styrke."" → "bursts from Styrke"." per MOS:QUOTE
"called it "fantastic"," → "called the song "fantastic",
"streams in the country." → "streams in Sweden."

Img looks good!
"Joanna Nordahl directed the accompanying music video for" → "Joanna Nordahl directed the music video for"
"to her, "It was fun to" → "to her and "it was fun to"
"stating that "We ended up" → "stating that they "ended up"
"of the 'perfect woman'."" → "of the 'perfect woman'"." per MOS:QUOTE
"in late-August 2017 on" → "in late August 2017 on"
Remove the comma after Visby Ladies
"that "It's this romantic theme" → "that "it's this romantic theme"
"on 4 October 2017 on Styrke's" → "on 4 October 2017, via Styrke's"
"She continues to run" → "Styrke continues to run"
The quote she "told The Fader" is not sourced

Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Copyvio score looks too high at 43.5%; cut down the level of direct quoting from The Fader and Variance to resolve this
Cite BroadwayWorld as publisher instead on refs 11 and 39
Cite Idolator as publisher instead on ref 19

On hold until all of the issues are fixed; that met my target time! --K. Peake 13:36, 30 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Kyle Peake: I think I've addressed all the issues now. Thanks for the review :) Pancake (talk) 20:34, 31 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

✓ Pass now, good job on this and kudos for a quick response! --K. Peake 07:09, 1 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]